英语四六级高分作文亮点词汇总结
<p> 英语四六级高分作文亮点心经： 1、是否长短句交叉; 2、是否会使用插入语; 3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实，句子开头不要总是用<span word="we">we</span> / <span word="I">I</span> 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> ,<span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="applicable">applicable</span> <span word="approaches">approaches</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="implemented">implemented</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="that">that</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="edge">edge</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sharpened">sharpened</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span>. 2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如<span word="however">however</span> / <span word="therefore">therefore</span> /<span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>/<span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： <span word="Other">Other</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="that">that</span> 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。比如上面例子中，<span word="applicable">applicable</span>替换<span word="proper">proper</span>, <span word="approaches">approaches</span>替换<span word="ways">ways</span>, <span word="implement">implement</span>替换<span word="carry">carry</span> <span word="out">out</span>, <span word="sharpen">sharpen</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="edge">edge</span>替换<span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="competitiveness">competitiveness</span> 下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。 <span word="Computer">Computer</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="forget">forget</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exceedingly">exceedingly</span> <span word="thrilling">thrilling</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="birthday">birthday</span> <span word="present">present</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="exerted">exerted</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tremendous">tremendous</span> <span word="fascination">fascination</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="indulged">indulged</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="googling">googling</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="army">army</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="useful">useful</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="expected">expected</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sea">sea</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="melodious">melodious</span> <span word="classic">classic</span> <span word="music">music</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="night">night</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="sleepless">sleepless</span>, <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="belonged">belonged</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="exceedingly">exceedingly</span> 替换 <span word="very">very</span> <span word="thrilling">thrilling</span> 替换 <span word="exciting">exciting</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>. <span word="exert">exert</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tremendous">tremendous</span> <span word="fascination">fascination</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="sb">sb</span> 替换 <span word="sb">sb</span>. <span word="be">be</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>. <span word="google">google</span> 替换 <span word="search">search</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="army">army</span> <span word="of">of</span> 替换 <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="dawn">dawn</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="century">century</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="popularity">popularity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="computers">computers</span>. <span word="Coincident">Coincident</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advancement">advancement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="computers">computers</span> <span word="pouring">pouring</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fashion">fashion</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="appealing">appealing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="exaggeration">exaggeration</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="submerged">submerged</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="measure">measure</span>! <span word="The">The</span> <span word="dawn">dawn</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="century">century</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; <span word="Increasing">Increasing</span> <span word="popularity">popularity</span> 替换 <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="Coincident">Coincident</span> <span word="with">with</span>非常地道的句型，表达与一致的意思，替换 <span word="With">With</span> <span word="Advancement">Advancement</span> 替换 <span word="development">development</span> <span word="Pour">Pour</span> <span word="into">into</span> 替换 <span word="enter">enter</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="Current">Current</span> 替换 <span word="now">now</span> <span word="Appeal">Appeal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sb">sb</span>. 替换 <span word="sb">sb</span>. <span word="be">be</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>. <span word="Growing">Growing</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> 替换 <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="exaggeration">exaggeration</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="say">say</span> 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的 <span word="For">For</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="start">start</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span>, <span word="freely">freely</span>, <span word="search">search</span> <span word="desired">desired</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="moment">moment</span> . <span word="Little">Little</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="little">little</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="enriched">enriched</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="horizons">horizons</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="broadened">broadened</span>. <span word="Additionally">Additionally</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="recreations">recreations</span> <span word="online">online</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="chatting">chatting</span>, <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="games">games</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="delivering">delivering</span> <span word="email">email</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="start">start</span> 替换 <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span>, <span word="freely">freely</span>, <span word="search">search</span> 用了插入语的写作手法 <span word="our">our</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="enriched">enriched</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="horizons">horizons</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="broadened">broadened</span>. 用了非常精彩的被动 <span word="Additionally">Additionally</span> 替换 <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> / <span word="Besides">Besides</span> <span word="Deliver">Deliver</span> 替换 <span word="send">send</span> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="denying">denying</span> <span word="that">that</span> , <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="computers">computers</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="function">function</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disservice">disservice</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="violence">violence</span> ,, <span word="porn">porn</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span>, <span word="AV">AV</span>-<span word="films">films</span> <span word="emerging">emerging</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="screen">screen</span> , <span word="which">which</span> <span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="quiet">quiet</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="net">net</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="copying">copying</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="denying">denying</span> <span word="that">that</span> , <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="computers">computers</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="function">function</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disservice">disservice</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span>, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先<span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="denying">denying</span> <span word="that">that</span>这个句型，还有<span word="however">however</span>作为插入语， <span word="function">function</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disservice">disservice</span> <span word="of">of</span> 替换 <span word="do">do</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Emerging">Emerging</span> 替换 <span word="appearing">appearing</span> <span word="Net">Net</span> <span word="citizen">citizen</span> 网民，属于精彩用词 <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="classic">classic</span> <span word="proverb">proverb</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="garden">garden</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="weeds">weeds</span>. <span word="Computers">Computers</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>, <span word="despite">despite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="slice">slice</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="unfavorable">unfavorable</span> <span word="impacts">impacts</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> ,<span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="take">take</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fruits">fruits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opposite">opposite</span> <span word="facet">facet</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="garden">garden</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="weeds">weeds</span> 替换 <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="coin">coin</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="Computers">Computers</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="play">play</span> ，<span word="do">do</span> 强调 <span word="Positive">Positive</span> 替换 <span word="important">important</span> / <span word="good">good</span> 等 <span word="A">A</span> <span word="slice">slice</span> <span word="of">of</span> 替换 <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Unfavorable">Unfavorable</span> 替换 <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="Impacts">Impacts</span> 替换 <span word="effects">effects</span> / <span word="influences">influences</span> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span>, <span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="take">take</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="of">of</span>使用插入语 <span word="Fruits">Fruits</span> 替换 <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="Facet">Facet</span> 替换 <span word="aspect">aspect</span> 以下是30个最经典的替换词，可以参考： 1.<span word="individuals">individuals</span>,<span word="characters">characters</span>, <span word="folks">folks</span>替换 2: <span word="positive">positive</span>, <span word="favorable">favorable</span>, <span word="rosy">rosy</span> , <span word="promising">promising</span>, <span word="perfect">perfect</span>, <span word="pleasurable">pleasurable</span> , <span word="excellent">excellent</span>, <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span>, <span word="superior">superior</span>替换<span word="good">good</span> 3.<span word="dreadful">dreadful</span>, <span word="unfavorable">unfavorable</span>, <span word="poor">poor</span>, <span word="adverse">adverse</span>, <span word="ill">ill</span> 替换<span word="bad">bad</span> 如果<span word="bad">bad</span>做表语，可以有<span word="be">be</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="impressive">impressive</span>替换 <span word="eg">eg</span>.<span word="An">An</span> <span word="army">army</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="indulge">indulge</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="games">games</span>, <span word="enjoying">enjoying</span> <span word="romance">romance</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="girls">girls</span>/<span word="boys">boys</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="killing">killing</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="passively">passively</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dorms">dorms</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="approaches">approaches</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> ,<span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="records">records</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="impressive">impressive</span>. 四六级 4.替换<span word="many">many</span>. 注：用<span word="many">many</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="most">most</span> 一定要小心，<span word="many">many</span>后一定要有词。 <span word="Eg">Eg</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="most">most</span>, <span word="harbor">harbor</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span>.同理 用<span word="most">most</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="all">all</span> ,替换<span word="most">most</span>. 5. <span word="a">a</span> <span word="slice">slice</span> <span word="of">of</span>, <span word="quiet">quiet</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> , <span word="several">several</span>替换<span word="some">some</span> 6.<span word="harbor">harbor</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="widely">widely</span> <span word="shared">shared</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="universally">universally</span> <span word="acknowledged">acknowledged</span> <span word="that">that</span>)替<span word="think">think</span> 7.<span word="affair">affair</span> ,<span word="business">business</span> ,<span word="matter">matter</span> 替换<span word="thing">thing</span> 8. <span word="shared">shared</span> 代 <span word="common">common</span> 9.<span word="reap">reap</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="fruits">fruits</span> 替换<span word="get">get</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> ) 10:<span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="part">part</span> ,<span word="from">from</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span> 替换 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> 11:<span word="Increasing">Increasing</span>,<span word="growing">growing</span> 替换<span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> 27. <span word="interaction">interaction</span>替换<span word="communication">communication</span> 28.<span word="frown">frown</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>替换 <span word="be">be</span> <span word="against">against</span> , <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="sth">sth</span> 29.<span word="to">to</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="example">example</span>替换 <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="instance">instance</span> 30. <span word="next">next</span> <span word="to">to</span> / <span word="virtually">virtually</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span>,替换<span word="nearly">nearly</span> / <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span></p>
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