英语六级作文范文及评析2
<p> <span word="Part">Part</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="Writing">Writing</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="sophisticated">sophisticated</span>, <span word="requiring">requiring</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="specialized">specialized</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="certified">certified</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="todays">todays</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="seeking">seeking</span> <span word="youth">youth</span>. <span word="More">More</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="especially">especially</span>, <span word="look">look</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="obtaining">obtaining</span> <span word="certification">certification</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="enjoying">enjoying</span> <span word="brighter">brighter</span> <span word="future">future</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="certificates">certificates</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="fields">fields</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="study">study</span>. <span word="Lawyers">Lawyers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="LSAT">LSAT</span>, <span word="business">business</span> <span word="majors">majors</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="GMAT">GMAT</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="US">US</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="language">language</span>, <span word="like">like</span> <span word="English">English</span>, <span word="might">might</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TOEFL">TOEFL</span>, <span word="TOEIC">TOEIC</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="certification">certification</span> <span word="exams">exams</span>. <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span>? <span word="Or">Or</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="certification">certification</span> <span word="craze">craze</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="eventually">eventually</span> <span word="pass">pass</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="obtained">obtained</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="certifications">certifications</span>: <span word="one">one</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Japanese">Japanese</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="language">language</span> . <span word="Both">Both</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="certifications">certifications</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="certified">certified</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="invaluable">invaluable</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span>. 作文点评： 1. 逻辑结构上，本文大体也是按照提出问题分析问题和解决问题的结构展开。 2. 本文的亮点非常多，用语非常地道，用英语思维催动出来的英语文章，才是真正的极品。相比用中式思维催动出来的英语文章，这篇文章是很美味的，强烈建议大家背诵下来。大家记得《天龙八部》吗?鸠摩智用小无相功催动出的招式是敌不过藏经阁里的扫地和尚的。总之，我们大可不必刻意使用难词难句，其实表意明确，用语地道的文章，就肯定可以拿到高分。</p>
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