英语六级作文范文及解析
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Way">Way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Success">Success</span> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="essaystream">essaystream</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="No">No</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exclusive">exclusive</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="love">love</span>. <span word="Others">Others</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="house">house</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="car">car</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="top">top</span> <span word="universitybut">universitybut</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="outward">outward</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="successful">successful</span>. <span word="People">People</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="Scott">Scott</span> <span word="Achor">Achor</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Happiness">Happiness</span> <span word="Advantage">Advantage</span> <span word="says">says</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opposite">opposite</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span>. <span word="Achor">Achor</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="professor">professor</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="Harvard">Harvard</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Happiness">Happiness</span> <span word="Course">Course</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fifteen">fifteen</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="wrote">wrote</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span> <span word="breeds">breeds</span> <span word="success">success</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="around">around</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="struck">struck</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chord">chord</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="realized">realized</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="positive">positive</span>, <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="with">with</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="tough">tough</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="knuckle">knuckle</span> <span word="under">under</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="persevere">persevere</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="overcome">overcome</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="obstacles">obstacles</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="figure">figure</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mission">mission</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="dreamno">dreamno</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="fits">fits</span> <span word="societys">societys</span> <span word="version">version</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="reality">reality</span>. <span word="Set">Set</span> <span word="goals">goals</span>, <span word="divide">divide</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="tasks">tasks</span>, <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span>, <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prize">prize</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="vision">vision</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="love">love</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="about">about</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="contribution">contribution</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="successful">successful</span>. 解析： 这是一篇议论文。结构非常清晰，首先由<span word="Achor">Achor</span>教授提出的<span word="success">success</span>与<span word="happiness">happiness</span>之间的关系，暗示了自己对于成功的解读。第二段，告诉读者<span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>的具体几个步骤：<span word="Set">Set</span> <span word="goals">goals</span>, <span word="divide">divide</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="tasks">tasks</span>, <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span>, <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prize">prize</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>. 与中式思维产出的英语文章相比，此文行文流畅深刻，说理充分，很有背诵的必要。但唯一的不足之处就是，字数超过了考题要求⊙﹏⊙<span word="b">b</span>。 本文亮点： 1. <span word="exclusive">exclusive</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span> 2. <span word="happiness">happiness</span> <span word="breeds">breeds</span> <span word="success">success</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="around">around</span> 3. <span word="it">it</span> <span word="struck">struck</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chord">chord</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="me">me</span> 4. <span word="knuckle">knuckle</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="fits">fits</span> <span word="societys">societys</span> <span word="version">version</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="reality">reality</span></p>
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