2012年12月英语四六级写作技巧的少用关系代词
<p> <span word="Where">Where</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>, <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="whether">whether</span>... <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="etc">etc</span>. 少用关系代词 学会运用关系代词是你学习英文过程中的一个重要的阶段。学会少用它们则表明你取得了更大的进步。在校对你的作品时，仔细检查一下所有的<span word="whichs">whichs</span>, <span word="whos">whos</span> <span word="thats">thats</span>和<span word="whoms">whoms</span>是否必要。删除不必要的关系代词会使你的文章更精彩。 <span word="Example">Example</span>: <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="universally">universally</span> <span word="acknowledged">acknowledged</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="possession">possession</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="fortune">fortune</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wife">wife</span>. <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="universally">universally</span> <span word="acknowledged">acknowledged</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="possession">possession</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="fortune">fortune</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wife">wife</span>. -- <span word="Jane">Jane</span> <span word="Austin">Austin</span> 注：被动语态修饰的名词通常不须用关系代词。 <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="In">In</span> 1970 <span word="India">India</span> <span word="dedicated">dedicated</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nuclear">nuclear</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="Bombay">Bombay</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="In">In</span> 1970 <span word="India">India</span> <span word="dedicated">dedicated</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nuclear">nuclear</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="Bombay">Bombay</span>, <span word="built">built</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="assistance">assistance</span>. <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="During">During</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="period">period</span>, <span word="Churchill">Churchill</span> <span word="spoke">spoke</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nation">nation</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="undivided">undivided</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="curiously">curiously</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="lifetime">lifetime</span>, <span word="before">before</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="since">since</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="During">During</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="period">period</span>, <span word="Churchill">Churchill</span> <span word="spoke">spoke</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nation">nation</span> <span word="undivided">undivided</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="curiously">curiously</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="lifetime">lifetime</span>, <span word="before">before</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="since">since</span>. <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="Justice">Justice</span> <span word="theories">theories</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="tradition">tradition</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Plato">Plato</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Aristotle">Aristotle</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> 5<span word="th">th</span> <span word="century">century</span> <span word="B">B</span>.<span word="C">C</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="Justice">Justice</span> <span word="theories">theories</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="tradition">tradition</span>, <span word="going">going</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Plato">Plato</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Aristotle">Aristotle</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> 5<span word="th">th</span> <span word="century">century</span> <span word="B">B</span>.<span word="C">C</span>. <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="Shirley">Shirley</span> <span word="Temples">Temples</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="blew">blew</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="entire">entire</span> $3 <span word="million">million</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="tap">tap</span> <span word="dancing">dancing</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movies">movies</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="Shirley">Shirley</span> <span word="Temples">Temples</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="blew">blew</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="entire">entire</span> $3 <span word="million">million</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="tap">tap</span> <span word="dancing">dancing</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fame">fame</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movies">movies</span>. <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="We">We</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="victims">victims</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="deserved">deserved</span> <span word="sympathy">sympathy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span>. <span word="Improved">Improved</span>: <span word="We">We</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="victims">victims</span>, <span word="most">most</span> <span word="deserving">deserving</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sympathy">sympathy</span>. <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="oblivious">oblivious</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="facts">facts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="vocational">vocational</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="today">today</span>. <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="oblivious">oblivious</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="facts">facts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="vocational">vocational</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="today">today</span>. <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="North">North</span> <span word="America">America</span> <span word="likes">likes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="taste">taste</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="green">green</span> <span word="tea">tea</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="caffeine">caffeine</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span>. <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="With">With</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="caffeine">caffeine</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="North">North</span> <span word="America">America</span> <span word="likes">likes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="taste">taste</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="green">green</span> <span word="tea">tea</span>. <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="Usually">Usually</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Washington">Washington</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="married">married</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="socially">socially</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="marriage">marriage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Georges">Georges</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="exception">exception</span>. <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="Usually">Usually</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Washingtons">Washingtons</span> <span word="married">married</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="betters">betters</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="marriage">marriage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Georges">Georges</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="exception">exception</span>. <span word="Unnecessary">Unnecessary</span>: <span word="In">In</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="instances">instances</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eight">eight</span> <span word="weeks">weeks</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="ship">ship</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="addressed">addressed</span>. <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="In">In</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="instances">instances</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eight">eight</span> <span word="weeks">weeks</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="ship">ship</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="receiver">receiver</span>.</p>
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