2012年6月英语六级写作范文及解析1
<p> 题目：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="impact">impact</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> 要求：<span word="commenting">commenting</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Dad">Dad</span>：<span word="Hi">Hi</span> <span word="sweetie">sweetie</span>, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="today">today</span>? <span word="Daughter">Daughter</span>: <span word="You">You</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="blog">blog</span>, <span word="Dad">Dad</span> 得分要点提示： 改作文类型既考表达，又考理解。如果只写网络对于人际交流的影响，而没有提到要求评论内容的评论。作文评分时，会受到很到影响。 范文： <span word="In">In</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="filled">filled</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="anecdotes">anecdotes</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="stories">stories</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="exception">exception</span>: <span word="Dad">Dad</span>：<span word="Hi">Hi</span> <span word="sweetie">sweetie</span>, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="today">today</span>? <span word="Daughter">Daughter</span>: <span word="You">You</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="blog">blog</span>, <span word="Dad">Dad</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="conversation">conversation</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="naturally">naturally</span> <span word="associated">associated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="impacts">impacts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>: <span word="In">In</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="era">era</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="impaired">impaired</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="online">online</span> <span word="chats">chats</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="blogs">blogs</span>. 当今社会，生活中有很多轶事或故事，下面的对话便是其中之一：爸爸：亲爱的，今天上学怎么样?女儿：都在博客上，自己看吧!老爸。该对话使我们很自然的联想到了网络对人际交流的影响：在网络的时代，人际交流的时间受到网络聊天或博客影响了。 <span word="Apparently">Apparently</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="impacts">impacts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="diverse">diverse</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="invention">invention</span>, <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="brings">brings</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>, <span word="eliminates">eliminates</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="barrier">barrier</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="distance">distance</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="touch">touch</span> <span word="wherever">wherever</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="whenever">whenever</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="enables">enables</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="members">members</span>, <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="face">face</span>-<span word="to">to</span>-<span word="face">face</span> <span word="way">way</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="youngsters">youngsters</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="chatting">chatting</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="acquaintances">acquaintances</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="QQ">QQ</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="MSN">MSN</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="rarely">rarely</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="face">face</span>. <span word="Unfortunately">Unfortunately</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="will">will</span>, <span word="definitely">definitely</span>, <span word="become">become</span> <span word="alienated">alienated</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="indifferent">indifferent</span>. 显然，网络对于人际交流是多方面的。一方面，作为一个重要发明，网络给我们的交流带来巨大便利，消除了我们交流的距离障碍，也帮助人们能够随时随地的联系。另一方面，正是网络没有使得人们与家人、朋友或同学面对面交流更多。一个典型的例子是年轻人可能花好几个小时上<span word="QQ">QQ</span>或<span word="MSN">MSN</span>与熟人热聊，但很少与他们面对面谈话。不幸的是，如果我们让这种趋势继续下去，人际关系将必然变得疏远。 <span word="To">To</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="understanding">understanding</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="advisable">advisable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="families">families</span>, <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="acquaintances">acquaintances</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="bear">bear</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>: <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tool">tool</span>. 在我看来，人们最好能够多与家人，友人和熟人多些现实生活交流，而不是网络交流。记住：网络，只是工具而已。</p>
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