2012年6月英语六级作文范文和解析
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Impact">Impact</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Interpersonal">Interpersonal</span> <span word="Communication">Communication</span> <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="influenced">influenced</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="extent">extent</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="fundamental">fundamental</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="application">application</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="anytime">anytime</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="anywhere">anywhere</span> <span word="via">via</span> <span word="internet">internet</span>. <span word="Otherwise">Otherwise</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="arrange">arrange</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="schedules">schedules</span> <span word="strictly">strictly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="advance">advance</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span>, <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="restricted">restricted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="space">space</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="multinational">multinational</span> <span word="corporations">corporations</span>, <span word="instant">instant</span> <span word="messages">messages</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="video">video</span> <span word="conferences">conferences</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="colleagues">colleagues</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="timely">timely</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="efficiently">efficiently</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="theres">theres</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="disadvantage">disadvantage</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="brings">brings</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="More">More</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="chat">chat</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="communicating">communicating</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="face">face</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="indifferent">indifferent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="inconvenience">inconvenience</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="strike">strike</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="balance">balance</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span>. 【点评】 这次的六级写作是请考生谈谈网络对人际交流的影响。这个话题本身已是日常生活的热点,考生并不陌生,有话可说。 文章的展开还是同过去的议论文写作一致。仍然可以用引入、阐释有何影响和自己的观点这样的三段式进行写作。在行文时,注意文章的层次和逻辑梳理,在谈具体影响时,可适当进行对比论证,论证网络出现和没有网络时,人际交流的差异,也可进行结合自身经历进行举例论证。 本篇范文在句式上,长短搭配,形式多变。从句、非谓语动词等多种表达方式,值得借鉴。同时,用词同样注意多样化,对网络相关词汇的多种表达,考生同样应在平时注意归类、积累。</p>
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