2013年英语四六级写作文章结构和思路点拨
<p> 第1段：引语引用+简单评论段 1文章第一句话：直接引用引语 1.1.第一句的第一种写法： 名人名言 ○1 .<span word="Sb">Sb</span>. <span word="once">once</span> <span word="said">said</span>. ○2 <span word="Sb">Sb</span>. <span word="once">once</span> <span word="said">said</span>， . ○3 <span word="I">I</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="familiar">familiar</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="words">words</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sb">sb</span>. , <span word="who">who</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="said">said</span>,. 我想你应该熟悉<span word="sb">sb</span>.说过的一句话，他曾经说过： . 1. 2第一句的第二种写法： 俗语/常言/习语/成语/谚语 ○1 <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="commonly">commonly</span>-<span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="saying">saying</span>/<span word="idiom">idiom</span>/<span word="proverb">proverb</span> <span word="goes">goes</span>， . ○2 <span word="I">I</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="familiar">familiar</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="saying">saying</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="commonly">commonly</span>-<span word="heard">heard</span> ,. 我想你应该熟悉一句耳熟能详的俗语/常言习语/谚语，是这么说的： . 2文章第二句话：简化引语+表层评论 2.1用自己的语言说明、解释抽象和凝练的引语，保持原意的同时，使之简洁易懂; 本句根据题目引语内容，自由发挥 2.2对引语的表层含义进行评论：就引语的事说事，不要上升到人生哲理高度 <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="that">that</span> 文章第二句话写法真题举例： <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="four">four</span>-<span word="hour">hour</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="chop">chop</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="smoothly">smoothly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="laboriously">laboriously</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="hours">hours</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>-<span word="chopping">chopping</span>. <span word="Quitting">Quitting</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="easy">easy</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="cigarettes">cigarettes</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="resist">resist</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="temptation">temptation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cigarette">cigarette</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="attempt">attempt</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="quit">quit</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="quit">quit</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="ease">ease</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="determination">determination</span>. 第2段：意义阐述段 3. 文章第三句话：由表及里，提炼挖掘引语的深层含义 3.1 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="saying">saying</span>/<span word="proverb">proverb</span>/ <span word="sbs">sbs</span> <span word="remark">remark</span> <span word="aims">aims</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="informing">informing</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="significance">significance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="A">A</span>. 3.2 <span word="Simple">Simple</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="sound">sound</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="abundant">abundant</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="philosophy">philosophy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="informs">informs</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="significance">significance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="A">A</span>. 4. 文章第四句话： 强调<span word="A">A</span>的重要性 4.1 <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="denying">denying</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="emphasize">emphasize</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span>. 4.2 <span word="why">why</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="A">A</span>. <span word="play">play</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="indispensable">indispensable</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>/ <span word="work">work</span>/ <span word="pursuit">pursuit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="success">success</span> ? 5. 文章第五句话： 论述<span word="A">A</span>的重要性 5.1 <span word="A">A</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="objectives">objectives</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="smoothly">smoothly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dreams">dreams</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="Communicative">Communicative</span>/<span word="Modest">Modest</span>/ <span word="Honest">Honest</span> /<span word="Cooperative">Cooperative</span>/ <span word="Inclusive">Inclusive</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="harmonious">harmonious</span> <span word="relationships">relationships</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="advantageous">advantageous</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="success">success</span>. 两个衍生体：<span word="action">action</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="Action">Action</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="objectives">objectives</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="smoothly">smoothly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dreams">dreams</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="action">action</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="take">take</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accumulate">accumulate</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="master">master</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="destination">destination</span>. <span word="Making">Making</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="objectives">objectives</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="smoothly">smoothly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dreams">dreams</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="detailed">detailed</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="make">make</span> , <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="unexpected">unexpected</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>/ 5.2 <span word="A">A</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="individual">individual</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="seemingly">seemingly</span> <span word="magic">magic</span> <span word="power">power</span>, <span word="A">A</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="accelerate">accelerate</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="development">development</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span> <span word="instrument">instrument</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. [<span word="The">The</span> <span word="consciousness">consciousness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="innovation">innovation</span>/ <span word="Confidence">Confidence</span>/ <span word="Dream">Dream</span> / <span word="Objective">Objective</span> / <span word="Diligence">Diligence</span>] 5.3 <span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="possess">possess</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="admired">admired</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="respected">respected</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="endow">endow</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="competence">competence</span>, <span word="chances">chances</span>, <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="overcome">overcome</span> <span word="difficulties">difficulties</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="approach">approach</span> <span word="challenges">challenges</span>. <span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="appear">appear</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="possess">possess</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="charm">charm</span>, <span word="bringing">bringing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>, <span word="passion">passion</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="surprise">surprise</span>, <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="winning">winning</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="favor">favor</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="trust">trust</span>. [<span word="A">A</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="will">will</span>/ <span word="Persistence">Persistence</span>/ <span word="Perseverance">Perseverance</span>/<span word="Optimism">Optimism</span> /<span word="Ppassion">Ppassion</span>/ <span word="Enthusiasm">Enthusiasm</span>/ <span word="Hope">Hope</span> / <span word="Courage">Courage</span> / <span word="Patience">Patience</span> ] 6. 文章第六句话：举例论述<span word="A">A</span>的重要性 6.1 <span word="Quite">Quite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prove">prove</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="A">A</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="illustration">illustration</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="one">one</span>: 6.2 <span word="To">To</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="demonstrate">demonstrate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="A">A</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="sb">sb</span>. <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="point">point</span>. 举例公式： <span word="Sb">Sb</span>. ,插入语, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="he">he</span>/<span word="she">she</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>. <span word="without">without</span> <span word="A">A</span> ? 第三段：结合实际 7. 文章第七句话：铭记<span word="A">A</span>的重要性 7.1 <span word="In">In</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="A">A</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="firmly">firmly</span>/<span word="bear">bear</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="exert">exert</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="profound">profound</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>/<span word="work">work</span>/<span word="health">health</span>/<span word="personality">personality</span>. 7.2 <span word="From">From</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="perspective">perspective</span>, <span word="at">at</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="ignore">ignore</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="A">A</span>. 8. 文章第八句话：采取具体行动，践行<span word="A">A</span>的重要精神 8.1 <span word="Accordingly">Accordingly</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="foster">foster</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="consciousness">consciousness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="sth">sth</span>. <span word="Develop">Develop</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="habit">habit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="work">work</span>/<span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>. 8.2 在日常生活/工作中，运用<span word="A">A</span>来解决问题 <span word="Hence">Hence</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="carry">carry</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="investigation">investigation</span>, <span word="set">set</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="draw">draw</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="detailed">detailed</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="actions">actions</span>. <span word="Hence">Hence</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="confronted">confronted</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="difficulties">difficulties</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="setbacks">setbacks</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="grit">grit</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="teeth">teeth</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="stick">stick</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="belief">belief</span>/<span word="faith">faith</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="will">will</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span>. 9. 文章第九句话： 名人名言，呼应主题 .<span word="Sb">Sb</span>. <span word="also">also</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="said">said</span>. 常用名言警句： 1. <span word="Living">Living</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="sailing">sailing</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="aim">aim</span>. <span word="Alexander">Alexander</span> <span word="Dumas">Dumas</span> 生活没有目标就像航海没有指南针. 2. <span word="Genius">Genius</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>-<span word="working">working</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="life">life</span>. 天才只意味着终身不懈的努力. 3. <span word="patience">patience</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bitter">bitter</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="fruit">fruit</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sweet">sweet</span>. 忍耐是痛苦的,但它的果实是甜蜜的. 4. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="slow">slow</span> <span word="walker">walker</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="walk">walk</span> <span word="backwards">backwards</span>. 我走得慢，但我从不后退 5. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="patience">patience</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="perfectly">perfectly</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="acquire">acquire</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="easily">easily</span>. . 只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人, 才能够轻而易举地完成困难的事. 6. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="yourself">yourself</span>. <span word="Thats">Thats</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="secret">secret</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="success">success</span>. 人你必须要对自己有信心，那是成功的秘诀 7. <span word="Happiness">Happiness</span> <span word="lies">lies</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mere">mere</span> <span word="possession">possession</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span>; <span word="it">it</span> <span word="lies">lies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="joy">joy</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="achievement">achievement</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="thrill">thrill</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="effort">effort</span>. 成功不仅仅在于拥有钱，还在于成就带来的喜悦，和努力带来的兴奋 8. <span word="None">None</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="smart">smart</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="Winston">Winston</span> <span word="Churchill">Churchill</span> 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮~丘吉尔</p>
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