六级作文人口增长与计划生育
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语句通顺，尤其是过渡句的运用，值得推荐。 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Expanding">Expanding</span> <span word="Population">Population</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Birth">Birth</span> <span word="Control">Control</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="birth">birth</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="developed">developed</span> <span word="fairly">fairly</span> <span word="recently">recently</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="desire">desire</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deide">deide</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="baby">baby</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="population">population</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="largely">largely</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="lowered">lowered</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="death">death</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="raised">raised</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="birth">birth</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="births">births</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="babies">babies</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="survive">survive</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="childhood">childhood</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="realization">realization</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="pace">pace</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="increases">increases</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="starving">starving</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="death">death</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="malnutrition">malnutrition</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="complicated">complicated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="America">America</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Europe">Europe</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="obtain">obtain</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="trade">trade</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="consume">consume</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="oil">oil</span> <span word="than">than</span>, <span word="say">say</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="Indian">Indian</span>, <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="leaving">leaving</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="underdeveloped">underdeveloped</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="survive">survive</span> <span word="on">on</span>. <span word="World">World</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="cent">cent</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span>;<span word="this">this</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="of">of</span> 70 <span word="million">million</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> 3,500 <span word="million">million</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="strking">strking</span> <span word="regional">regional</span> <span word="differences">differences</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="growth">growth</span> <span word="trends">trends</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="fastest">fastest</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Latin">Latin</span> <span word="America">America</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="includes">includes</span> <span word="South">South</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Central">Central</span> <span word="America">America</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Caribbean">Caribbean</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="Africa">Africa</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Asia">Asia</span> <span word="closely">closely</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="Latin">Latin</span> <span word="America">America</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="largest">largest</span> <span word="absolute">absolute</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Asia">Asia</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="fifths">fifths</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>.</p>
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