meili 发表于 2022-10-18 20:14:06

六级英语学生需要心理健康

<p>  这篇作文条理清晰,语句通顺,值得推荐,尤其是过渡句的应用。  <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Need">Need</span> <span word="Mentally">Mentally</span> <span word="Healthy">Healthy</span> <span word="Mind">Mind</span>  <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="hidden">hidden</span> <span word="mental">mental</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="immediate">immediate</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="adequate">adequate</span> <span word="guidance">guidance</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="host">host</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="emotional">emotional</span> <span word="disorders">disorders</span> <span word="touch">touch</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="depression">depression</span>, <span word="sleep">sleep</span> <span word="disorders">disorders</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="performance">performance</span>. <span word="Anxious">Anxious</span> <span word="hearts">hearts</span>, <span word="hopeless">hopeless</span> <span word="minds">minds</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="nervous">nervous</span> <span word="breakdowns">breakdowns</span> <span word="chase">chase</span> <span word="them">them</span>.  <span word="Mental">Mental</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span> <span word="wealth">wealth</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="possess">possess</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="act">act</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="wisdom">wisdom</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="body">body</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="challenge">challenge</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="hardships">hardships</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Todays">Todays</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="versatile">versatile</span> <span word="talents">talents</span> , <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="firm">firm</span> <span word="willed">willed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>.  <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="joint">joint</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="mental">mental</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="Parents">Parents</span>, <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="balanced">balanced</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="mental">mental</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="optimistic">optimistic</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="mental">mental</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>. </p><p>  </p>
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