六级英语作文成功的婚姻
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语句通顺，值得推荐，尤其是过渡句的运用。 <span word="Successful">Successful</span> <span word="Marriage">Marriage</span> <span word="Successful">Successful</span> <span word="marriage">marriage</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="support">support</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="relieves">relieves</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="stress">stress</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="mental">mental</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="health">health</span>. <span word="Husbands">Husbands</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="marriage">marriage</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="wives">wives</span> <span word="do">do</span>. <span word="Married">Married</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="mental">mental</span> <span word="health">health</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="happier">happier</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="women">women</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="men">men</span>. <span word="Various">Various</span> <span word="explanations">explanations</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="considered">considered</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="plau">plau</span> <span word="sible">sible</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="wives">wives</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="husbands">husbands</span>. <span word="Perhaps">Perhaps</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="more">more</span>? <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stresses">stresses</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="worse">worse</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="die">die</span> <span word="earlier">earlier</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="women">women</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="married">married</span>, <span word="their">their</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="boring">boring</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="isolated">isolated</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="ill">ill</span>-<span word="prepared">prepared</span>. <span word="Despite">Despite</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="marriage">marriage</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="stressful">stressful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="shape">shape</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span>, <span word="their">their</span> <span word="earnings">earnings</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="status">status</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="home">home</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="work">work</span>.</p><p> </p>
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