六级作文东京—重建之城
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语句通顺，值得推荐，尤其是过渡句的运用。 <span word="Tokyo">Tokyo</span>-<span word="a">a</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="Rebuilt">Rebuilt</span> <span word="Tokyo">Tokyo</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="capital">capital</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="largest">largest</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="worlds">worlds</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>. <span word="Twice">Twice</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> 20<span word="th">th</span> <span word="century">century</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="destroyed">destroyed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rebuilt">rebuilt</span>. <span word="In">In</span> 1923 <span word="a">a</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="earthquake">earthquake</span> <span word="struck">struck</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="Thousands">Thousands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="killed">killed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="homeless">homeless</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="collapsed">collapsed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fires">fires</span> <span word="broke">broke</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="Tokyo">Tokyo</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="seven">seven</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rebuild">rebuild</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>.<span word="During">During</span> <span word="World">World</span> <span word="War">War</span> 11 , <span word="Tokyo">Tokyo</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="destroyed">destroyed</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="again">again</span>.<span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="disasters">disasters</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="Tokyo">Tokyo</span> <span word="remaining">remaining</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="downtown">downtown</span> <span word="area">area</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="war">war</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Tokyo">Tokyo</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rebuild">rebuild</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="Buildings">Buildings</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fantastic">fantastic</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="between">between</span> 1945 <span word="and">and</span> 1960, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citys">citys</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="doubled">doubled</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Games">Games</span> <span word="held">held</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Tokyo">Tokyo</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1964, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="stadiums">stadiums</span>,<span word="parks">parks</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hotels">hotels</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accomodate">accomodate</span> <span word="visitors">visitors</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="rapid">rapid</span> <span word="development">development</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="arisen">arisen</span>. <span word="Housing">Housing</span> <span word="shortage">shortage</span>, <span word="pollution">pollution</span>,<span word="waste">waste</span> <span word="disposal">disposal</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="challenges">challenges</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="begun">begun</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p><p> </p>
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