六级作文批判公共场所不文明现象
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语言流利，值得推荐，尤其是常用短语的运用。 <span word="Immoral">Immoral</span> <span word="Behavior">Behavior</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Public">Public</span> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="witness">witness</span> <span word="immoral">immoral</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="public">public</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="subway">subway</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="subway">subway</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hurry">hurry</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="trying">trying</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="ticket">ticket</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="waiting">waiting</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="front">front</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="nobody">nobody</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="line">line</span>.<span word="Immoral">Immoral</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="exert">exert</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="series">series</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="exert">exert</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="impact">impact</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="ignoring">ignoring</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="rights">rights</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="feelings">feelings</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="disrespected">disrespected</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="day">day</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="certainly">certainly</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="easy">easy</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="eye">eye</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="implementation">implementation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="effectiveness">effectiveness</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="propose">propose</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="respect">respect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="punished">punished</span>. <span word="Stricter">Stricter</span> <span word="policies">policies</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="correct">correct</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. </p><p> </p>
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