六级英语我对承诺的看法
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语言流利，值得推荐，尤其是连词的运用。 <span word="MY">MY</span> <span word="VIEW">VIEW</span> <span word="ON">ON</span> <span word="SO">SO</span> <span word="CALLED">CALLED</span> <span word="PROMISES">PROMISES</span> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cartoon">cartoon</span>, <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hen">hen</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="swarm">swarm</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tide">tide</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="promise">promise</span>-<span word="making">making</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="observe">observe</span> <span word="that">that</span>. <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="promises">promises</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="duties">duties</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="fulfill">fulfill</span>, <span word="just">just</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="eggs">eggs</span> <span word="laid">laid</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hen">hen</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="complicated">complicated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="false">false</span> <span word="promises">promises</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="harmful">harmful</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="thegiver">thegiver</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="false">false</span> <span word="promises">promises</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="enterprises">enterprises</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="deeds">deeds</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="departments">departments</span>. <span word="Promises">Promises</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="enterprises">enterprises</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trust">trust</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trust">trust</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="force">force</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="develop">develop</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trust">trust</span>, <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span>, <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enterprises">enterprises</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="promoting">promoting</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="mainly">mainly</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="customers">customers</span>. <span word="Nevertheless">Nevertheless</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wide">wide</span> <span word="spread">spread</span> <span word="false">false</span> <span word="promises">promises</span> <span word="undermine">undermine</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trust">trust</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="will">will</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="run">run</span>, <span word="undermine">undermine</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rapid">rapid</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span>, <span word="too">too</span>. <span word="So">So</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="false">false</span> <span word="promises">promises</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="forbid">forbid</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="false">false</span> <span word="ads">ads</span>, <span word="forfeit">forfeit</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="severely">severely</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="fortify">fortify</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="whats">whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="why">why</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="strict">strict</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="draw">draw</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lesson">lesson</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hell">hell</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cartoon">cartoon</span>? </p>
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