六级作文：父母该给孩子零花钱吗
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语句通顺，值得推荐，尤其是过渡句的运用。 <span word="Ought">Ought</span> <span word="Parents">Parents</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Give">Give</span> <span word="Children">Children</span> <span word="Pocket">Pocket</span> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Everything">Everything</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="merchandise">merchandise</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="money">money</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="Earning">Earning</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="adults">adults</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kids">kids</span>. <span word="Kids">Kids</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="of">of</span> 20. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="childhood">childhood</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kid">kid</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> 9 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kid">kid</span> 10 <span word="yuan">yuan</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="month">month</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="uses">uses</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="earning">earning</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="easy">easy</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="love">love</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="correct">correct</span> <span word="understanding">understanding</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="approach">approach</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="closely">closely</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span>.</p><p> </p>
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