六级英语作文电视破坏了友谊和家庭
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语句通顺，各种从句的运用很恰当，值得借鉴。 <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="destroyed">destroyed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="controversy">controversy</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="destroyed">destroyed</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="baffled">baffled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="television">television</span>. <span word="Others">Others</span> <span word="criticize">criticize</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="totally">totally</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latter">latter</span> <span word="one">one</span>. <span word="Watching">Watching</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="whatever">whatever</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="together">together</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="TV">TV</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="start">start</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="content">content</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movie">movie</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>. <span word="Imagining">Imagining</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="disappears">disappears</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="rooms">rooms</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="laundry">laundry</span>, <span word="do">do</span> <span word="washing">washing</span> <span word="dish">dish</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stay">stay</span> <span word="together">together</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="supplies">supplies</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="information">information</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="constructive">constructive</span> <span word="movies">movies</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="TV">TV</span>, <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="story">story</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="story">story</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>, <span word="reinforce">reinforce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cherish">cherish</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="broiling">broiling</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="last">last</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="recreation">recreation</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span>. <span word="Communication">Communication</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="undertaken">undertaken</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="means">means</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="going">going</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="together">together</span>, <span word="entering">entering</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bar">bar</span>, <span word="talking">talking</span> <span word="intimately">intimately</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>, <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="diversified">diversified</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="doesnt">doesnt</span> <span word="destroy">destroy</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="together">together</span>. </p>
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