六级作文家庭与个人发展的关系
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语言流畅，尤其是常用短语的运用，值得推荐。 <span word="Family">Family</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Personal">Personal</span> <span word="Development">Development</span> <span word="Family">Family</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="development">development</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="family">family</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="optimistic">optimistic</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unhappy">unhappy</span> <span word="family">family</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="miserable">miserable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pessimistic">pessimistic</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="loved">loved</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="family">family</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="An">An</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="warmth">warmth</span>, <span word="help">help</span>, <span word="comfort">comfort</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strength">strength</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="source">source</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="laughter">laughter</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lessen">lessen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tension">tension</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="cultivate">cultivate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="confidence">confidence</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="mental">mental</span> <span word="health">health</span>. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="considerate">considerate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="understanding">understanding</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="strive">strive</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="family">family</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="stable">stable</span>.</p><p> </p>
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