六级作文独自旅行还是结伴而行
<p> 这篇作文有很多地方值得借鉴：过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 <span word="Travel">Travel</span> <span word="Alone">Alone</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Travel">Travel</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Companion">Companion</span>? <span word="When">When</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="different">different</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="opinions">opinions</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="companion">companion</span>. <span word="Of">Of</span> <span word="course">course</span>, <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="preference">preference</span>. <span word="Traveling">Traveling</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="traveler">traveler</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="arrange">arrange</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="tour">tour</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="wishes">wishes</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humoring">humoring</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traveler">traveler</span> <span word="unexpected">unexpected</span> <span word="surprise">surprise</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enjoying">enjoying</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="scenery">scenery</span>. <span word="Compared">Compared</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>, <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="companion">companion</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="journey">journey</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="companion">companion</span>. <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="difficulties">difficulties</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="journey">journey</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="sum">sum</span>, <span word="both">both</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="companion">companion</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="attractions">attractions</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="one">one</span>. </p><p> </p>
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