六级作文我国教育援助
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语言流畅，值得推荐，尤其是过渡句的运用。 <span word="Aid">Aid</span> <span word="Education">Education</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="calls">calls</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="povertystricken">povertystricken</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="general">general</span>, <span word="aideducation">aideducation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="widen">widen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="horizon">horizon</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="underdeveloped">underdeveloped</span> <span word="regions">regions</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="volunteers">volunteers</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="totally">totally</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rigorous">rigorous</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="adapting">adapting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="harsh">harsh</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="enjoying">enjoying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="appreciation">appreciation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ondistance">ondistance</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="chinas">chinas</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="isolated">isolated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="calls">calls</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="joint">joint</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="citizen">citizen</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="word">word</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="appeal">appeal</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="offering">offering</span> <span word="aid">aid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="areas">areas</span>.</p><p> </p>
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