六级英语作文个人责任与社会环境
<p> 这篇作文条理清晰，语言通顺，值得推荐，尤其是过渡句的运用。</p><p> <span word="Personal">Personal</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="environment">environment</span></p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="concept">concept</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="fiction">fiction</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="socities">socities</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="accountable">accountable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="actions">actions</span>, <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="largely">largely</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="forces">forces</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="making">making</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="title">title</span> <span word="statement">statement</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="holds">holds</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contention">contention</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="concept">concept</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="existence">existence</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fiction">fiction</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="says">says</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="fundamentally">fundamentally</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="control">control</span>. <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="deeply">deeply</span> <span word="influenced">influenced</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="laws">laws</span>, <span word="societies">societies</span>, <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="exterior">exterior</span> <span word="forces">forces</span>; <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="exists">exists</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="functions">functions</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rule">rule</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>.<span word="On">On</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highest">highest</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="any">any</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="identity">identity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ethical">ethical</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="moral">moral</span> <span word="standards">standards</span>. <span word="Though">Though</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="obligation">obligation</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="first">first</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="accountability">accountability</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="presumably">presumably</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="eventually">eventually</span> <span word="followed">followed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="identification">identification</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="identity">identity</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="direct">direct</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="force">force</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exterior">exterior</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="soldier">soldier</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="duty">duty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="obey">obey</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rules">rules</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="hesitation">hesitation</span>; <span word="a">a</span> <span word="surgeon">surgeon</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="healing">healing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="patients">patients</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="accountability">accountability</span>; <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="historian">historian</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discover">discover</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> <span word="descriptions">descriptions</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="different">different</span> <span word="careers">careers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="roles">roles</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="diverse">diverse</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="responsibilities">responsibilities</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="individualsvoluntary">individualsvoluntary</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span>.</p>
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