六级最后冲刺（二）高分作文点评
<p> 四考试越来越使模板无用武之地，阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中更多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。</p><p> 高分作文标志：</p><p> 1、120-150字;150 180字;</p><p> 2、是否长短句交叉;</p><p> 3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;</p><p> 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;</p><p> 高分作文注意事项：</p><p> 1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用<span word="we">we</span> / <span word="I">I</span> 举个经典结尾2004年六月作文的最后一段：<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> ,<span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="applicable">applicable</span> <span word="approaches">approaches</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="implemented">implemented</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="that">that</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>，<span word="its">its</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="edge">edge</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sharpened">sharpened</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span>.</p><p> 2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。</p><p> 如<span word="however">however</span> / <span word="therefore">therefore</span> /<span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>/<span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span>做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。</p><p> 比如说：<span word="Other">Other</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="attitude">attitude</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> 3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。比如上面例子中，<span word="applicable">applicable</span>代替<span word="proper">proper</span>, <span word="approaches">approaches</span>代替<span word="ways">ways</span>, <span word="implement">implement</span>代替<span word="carry">carry</span> <span word="out">out</span>, <span word="sharpen">sharpen</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="edge">edge</span>代替<span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="competitiveness">competitiveness</span></p>
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