六级最后冲刺（一）考生作文样卷点评
<p> 从句到段：段落的展开</p><p> 基本句法掌握之后，接下来就要训练段落写作，这是因为段落是文章的基本组成部分，要写出好文章，必须在段落写作上多下功夫。</p><p> 段的基本组成是句子，好的段落应该是该段中所有的句子都围绕着一个主题展开，且句与句之间应该是紧密相连，形成统一的整体即<span word="unified">unified</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="coherent">coherent</span>。那么怎样将一个段落展开呢?下面介绍英语中几种常用的方法。</p><p> 时间顺序 按时间顺序写作就是按照事物发展在时间上的正常顺序或先后顺序展开段落。在讲述故事或回忆事件时，先发生的先写，后发生的后写。请看下面的例子：</p><p> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="heart">heart</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="leap">leap</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="announcement">announcement</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="train">train</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="soon">soon</span> <span word="arrive">arrive</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="destination">destination</span> <span word="beijing">beijing</span>. <span word="like">like</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="passengers">passengers</span>, <span word="i">i</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="collect">collect</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mug">mug</span>, <span word="towel">towel</span>, <span word="atlas">atlas</span>, <span word="apples">apples</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="bag">bag</span>. <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tune">tune</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="song">song</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="train">train</span> <span word="pulled">pulled</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="station">station</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="gently">gently</span> <span word="stopped">stopped</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="platform">platform</span>. <span word="i">i</span> <span word="walked">walked</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="train">train</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="forward">forward</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stream">stream</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="underground">underground</span> <span word="passage">passage</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="hall">hall</span>. <span word="as">as</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="stepped">stepped</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="station">station</span>, <span word="i">i</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="dazzled">dazzled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bright">bright</span> <span word="autumn">autumn</span> <span word="skies">skies</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="beijing">beijing</span>. <span word="though">though</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="train">train</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="thirty">thirty</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="spent">spent</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="sleepless">sleepless</span> <span word="night">night</span>, <span word="i">i</span> <span word="didn">didn</span> <span word="t">t</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="tired">tired</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="believed">believed</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="glorious">glorious</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="sunny">sunny</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="skies">skies</span>.</p>
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