六级英语作文的原稿与修改稿对照学习
<p> 四考试在即，特修改了一份同学的作文，括号内为修改稿，请同学们体会和句型用法，并与原文对照，仔细琢磨。谢谢!祝各位好运!</p><p> 世界正在变得越来越小</p><p> <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span>, <span word="science">science</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="rapid">rapid</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span>.</p><p> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="dominates">dominates</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="smaller">smaller</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="smaller">smaller</span>.</p><p> <span word="currently">currently</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="forms">forms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="altering">altering</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="night">night</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="corresponding">corresponding</span> <span word="techniques">techniques</span> <span word="improving">improving</span>. <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="communicate">communicate</span> <span word="coming">coming</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="requisition">requisition</span>.</p><p> <span word="mobile">mobile</span> <span word="telephone">telephone</span>, <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="visual">visual</span> <span word="telephone">telephone</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="belong">belong</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="instrument">instrument</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="widely">widely</span> <span word="combined">combined</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>.</p><p> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="connect">connect</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="internet">internet</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="function">function</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="software">software</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="icq">icq</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="msn">msn</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contact">contact</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="request">request</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="touch">touch</span> <span word="with">with</span>.</p><p> <span word="visual">visual</span> <span word="telephone">telephone</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="style">style</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="updated">updated</span> <span word="phone">phone</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="transmit">transmit</span> <span word="voice">voice</span> <span word="signal">signal</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="visual">visual</span> <span word="signal">signal</span> <span word="simultaneously">simultaneously</span>.</p><p> <span word="synchronously">synchronously</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="vehicle">vehicle</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="coming">coming</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="popular">popular</span>.</p><p> <span word="plane">plane</span>, <span word="high">high</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="train">train</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="shuttle">shuttle</span> <span word="bus">bus</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="diffused">diffused</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span>.</p><p> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="original">original</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="from">from</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="via">via</span> <span word="modernized">modernized</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="implement">implement</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="system">system</span>.</p>
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