英语六级作文：电视相亲节目（高分评点）4
<p> 高分作文+点评：</p><p> 高分作文：</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="blind">blind</span>-<span word="date">date</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="channels">channels</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="weekend">weekend</span> <span word="evenings">evenings</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="days">days</span>. <span word="People">People</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="program">program</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="girls">girls</span>, <span word="handsome">handsome</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shows">shows</span>.</p><p> <span word="Several">Several</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="popularity">popularity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="shows">shows</span>. <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="love">love</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="shy">shy</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="love">love</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="showing">showing</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="front">front</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="millions">millions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="network">network</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="narrow">narrow</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="targets">targets</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="shows">shows</span>. <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="choices">choices</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="show">show</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="advertise">advertise</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="audience">audience</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="treat">treat</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="mere">mere</span> <span word="amusement">amusement</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="listen">listen</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="guests">guests</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hosts">hosts</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="lovers">lovers</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="show">show</span>.</p><p> 点评：</p><p> <span word="Excellent">Excellent</span>! 你的思路很清晰，而且表达能力非常好,高分作文!</p><p> </p>
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