英语六级作文高分点评：大学生自助游
<p> 题目：<span word="Self">Self</span>-<span word="help">help</span> <span word="Traveling">Traveling</span></p><p> 1、越来越多的大学生选择自助游</p><p> 2、也会带来一些问题</p><p> 3、我的看法</p><p>高分作文：</p><p> <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="help">help</span> <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="packaged">packaged</span> <span word="one">one</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rigidly">rigidly</span>-<span word="planned">planned</span> <span word="schedule">schedule</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="these">these</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="stay">stay</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="spot">spot</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="fascinating">fascinating</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="scene">scene</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="regard">regard</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="captivating">captivating</span>. <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="sum">sum</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="accommodation">accommodation</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="instead">instead</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="cheaper">cheaper</span> <span word="place">place</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="denied">denied</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="help">help</span> <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="safe">safe</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="remote">remote</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="mountains">mountains</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="risky">risky</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="neither">neither</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dealing">dealing</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="emergencies">emergencies</span> <span word="nor">nor</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="somebody">somebody</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="resort">resort</span> <span word="to">to</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="nobody">nobody</span> <span word="knows">knows</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>.</p><p> <span word="Independent">Independent</span> <span word="travelling">travelling</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="enjoyable">enjoyable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cost">cost</span>-<span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="nearby">nearby</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="travelers">travelers</span>, <span word="before">before</span> <span word="starting">starting</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="supposed">supposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="preparations">preparations</span>, <span word="including">including</span> <span word="route">route</span>, <span word="accommodations">accommodations</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="emergency">emergency</span> <span word="aids">aids</span>.</p><p> 点评：</p><p> <span word="Excellent">Excellent</span>!高分作文!结构安排合理，语言通顺流畅，用词丰富，继续保持!</p>
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