英语六级14分作文范文批改2
<p> 英语六级待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="attracted">attracted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="shows">shows</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="shock">shock</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="youngsters">youngsters</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="overnight">overnight</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="talents">talents</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span> , <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enriching">enriching</span> <span word="audiences">audiences</span> <span word="spiritual">spiritual</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="channels">channels</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="incomes">incomes</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="justified">justified</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="exaggeration">exaggeration</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="sides">sides</span>. <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="way">way</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="advise">advise</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shows">shows</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="decide">decide</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="show">show</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="balance">balance</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learning">learning</span>.</p><p> 英语六级作文批改如下：</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="attracted">attracted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="shows">shows</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="shock">shock</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="youngsters">youngsters</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="overnight">overnight</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>,<span word="some">some</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span>（翻译不通）. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="providea">providea</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="talents">talents</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enriching">enriching</span>（改为<span word="enrich">enrich</span>）<span word="audiences">audiences</span> <span word="spiritual">spiritual</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="least">least</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="channels">channels</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="huge">huge</span> <span word="incomes">incomes</span>.</p>
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