英语六级14分作文范文批改1
<p> 英语六级待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="chart">chart</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="illustrate">illustrate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="users">users</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span>.<span word="It">It</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="only">only</span> 200 <span word="users">users</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1999, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="surged">surged</span> <span word="to">to</span> 500 <span word="ina">ina</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="span">span</span> <span word="ofthree">ofthree</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="years">years</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2002.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="explainthis">explainthis</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="first">first</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="phonesare">phonesare</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="moreplentiful">moreplentiful</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="function">function</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="connection">connection</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="touch">touch</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span>, <span word="especiallyin">especiallyin</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="youare">youare</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="waiting">waiting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="calls">calls</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="boss">boss</span>, <span word="your">your</span> <span word="colleagues">colleagues</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="chat">chat</span> <span word="withyou">withyou</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="looks">looks</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="net">net</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="tangle">tangle</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="negtive">negtive</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="remember">remember</span>, <span word="let">let</span> <span word="yourmind">yourmind</span> <span word="escape">escape</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="calls">calls</span> <span word="occasionally">occasionally</span>.</p><p> 英语六级作文批改如下：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="chart">chart</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="illustrate">illustrate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="users">users</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span>.<span word="It">It</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="only">only</span> 200 <span word="users">users</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1999, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="surged">surged</span> <span word="to">to</span> 500 <span word="ina">ina</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="span">span</span> <span word="ofthree">ofthree</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="Andin">Andin</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="yearstwice">yearstwice</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="asitin">asitin</span> 2002.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="explainthis">explainthis</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="first">first</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="phonesarelower">phonesarelower</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="moreplentiful">moreplentiful</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="function">function</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="societyand">societyand</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="othersrequire">othersrequire</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="connection">connection</span>.</p>
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