六级模考作文思路详解
<p> <span word="Part">Part</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="Writing">Writing</span></p><p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>:<span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="entitled">entitled</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Significance">Significance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Loveby">Loveby</span> <span word="explaining">explaining</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="metaphor">metaphor</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="exact">exact</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="Love">Love</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="light">light</span>, <span word="being">being</span> <span word="brighter">brighter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="darker">darker</span> <span word="places">places</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span>120<span word="words">words</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> 200<span word="words">words</span>.</p><p> 解析:按照六级考试委员会所给内部资料中的评论标准,此类考题考查两方面的内容:即理解和表达能力。</p><p> 高分作文必须按照题目要求展开,需包含以下内容:1)题目,即爱心的重要性(题目要求需有例子支撑);2)评论:对于所给名言或警句的评论。</p><p> 如果只写其中一部分,作文最高得分不超过9分。(注:阅卷时采用原始赋分满分15分。之后经过标准分转化成710分制,写作部分满分106.5分)</p><p> 从六种功能段落备考角度看,该类作文其实和以前考题没有本质性区别。原来是汉语提纲提出写作内容上要求,如今是英文形式提出写作内容上的要求。</p><p> 既然都是命题要求,英汉要求只是形式上的变化,本质还是:按照题目要求去写相应的功能段落。</p><p> 如果写模板作文,本篇作文建议写作思路如下:</p><p> 首段:现象(该警句所对应现象)+评论</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="host">host</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rewarding">rewarding</span> <span word="totake">totake</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="love">love</span>.<span word="Meanwhile">Meanwhile</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="metaphor">metaphor</span>/<span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="describing">describing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="significance">significance</span> <span word="oflove">oflove</span>:<span word="Love">Love</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="light">light</span>, <span word="being">being</span> <span word="brighter">brighter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="darker">darker</span> <span word="places">places</span>.<span word="From">From</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span>,<span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="darker">darker</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>.</p>
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