英语六级8分作文范文批改1
<p> 英语六级待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="psychologically">psychologically</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="psychologically">psychologically</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="contributing">contributing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="conceivable">conceivable</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="mainly">mainly</span> <span word="arisen">arisen</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="factors">factors</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speedy">speedy</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="challenges">challenges</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="age">age</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="reluctant">reluctant</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="approach">approach</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="skill">skill</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>.</p><p> <span word="Taking">Taking</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span>-<span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="imperative">imperative</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="psychological">psychological</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="appeal">appeal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="authorities">authorities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cultivate">cultivate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="keeping">keeping</span> <span word="psychological">psychological</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="significance">significance</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="brilliant">brilliant</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p> 作文批改如下：</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="psychologically">psychologically</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span>（心理健康不是一个严重的问题，心理疾病才是问题，此处改为<span word="psychological">psychological</span> <span word="disease">disease</span>）<span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="psychologically">psychologically</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="contributing">contributing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span>.（题目要求本段写心理健康问题是导致疾病的主要原因，并不是写很多原因导致心理不健康，你应该把题目的要求翻译成英文，在下一段再写最后一句话）</p>
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