英语六级17分作文范文批改2
<p> 英语六级待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speedy">speedy</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="witness">witness</span> <span word="immoral">immoral</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="public">public</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="sightseeing">sightseeing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tourist">tourist</span> <span word="attraction">attraction</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="tourists">tourists</span> <span word="discarded">discarded</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="picnic">picnic</span> <span word="leftovers">leftovers</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="immoral">immoral</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nation">nation</span> <span word="renowned">renowned</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="virtue">virtue</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="practicing">practicing</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="owing">owing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="factor">factor</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="respected">respected</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span>-<span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="faith">faith</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>.</p><p> <span word="Hence">Hence</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="imperative">imperative</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="measures">measures</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="significance">significance</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="appeal">appeal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="authorities">authorities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cultivate">cultivate</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="ordinary">ordinary</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="brilliant">brilliant</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p> 作文批改如下：</p><p> <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speedy">speedy</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="witness">witness</span> <span word="immoral">immoral</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="public">public</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="sightseeing">sightseeing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tourist">tourist</span> <span word="attraction">attraction</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="tourists">tourists</span> <span word="discarded">discarded</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="picnic">picnic</span> <span word="leftovers">leftovers</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="immoral">immoral</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nation">nation</span> <span word="renowned">renowned</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="virtue">virtue</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="practicing">practicing</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="behaviors">behaviors</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="owing">owing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span>（改为<span word="this">this</span>） <span word="factor">factor</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="be">be</span>（改为<span word="is">is</span>） <span word="respected">respected</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span>-<span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="faith">faith</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>（用法错误）.</p>
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