英语六级2分作文范文批改1
<p> 英语六级待批改作文:</p><p> <span word="Fast">Fast</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="children">children</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="break">break</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="meal">meal</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="compressed">compressed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="pace">pace</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="Western">Western</span> <span word="Fast">Fast</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="you">you</span>-<span word="dont">dont</span>-<span word="wait">wait</span>, <span word="of">of</span> <span word="course">course</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="delicious">delicious</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span>.</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="maybe">maybe</span> <span word="Fast">Fast</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="in">in</span>-<span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="Eating">Eating</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="KFC">KFC</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="pride">pride</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="heart">heart</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="enjoying">enjoying</span> <span word="KFC">KFC</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="MacDonald">MacDonald</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>. <span word="Unforgettable">Unforgettable</span> <span word="delicious">delicious</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span>.</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="collective">collective</span> <span word="canteen">canteen</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="opened">opened</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="ought">ought</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="educate">educate</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="shouldnt">shouldnt</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="more">more</span>.</p><p> 作文批改如下：</p><p> （加<span word="Western">Western</span>）<span word="Fast">Fast</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="though">though</span>（改为<span word="among">among</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="children">children</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="break">break</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="meal">meal</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="compressed">compressed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="pace">pace</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="Western">Western</span> <span word="Fast">Fast</span> <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="you">you</span>-<span word="dont">dont</span>-<span word="wait">wait</span>, <span word="of">of</span> <span word="course">course</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="delicious">delicious</span>,（改为<span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="delicious">delicious</span>）（加<span word="so">so</span>）<span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span>.</p>
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