英语六级8分作文范文批改2
<p> 英语六级待批改作文：</p><p> <span word="Why">Why</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="times">times</span>.<span word="Actually">Actually</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>.<span word="Everytime">Everytime</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Mcdonalds">Mcdonalds</span>,<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="prevailing">prevailing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="china">china</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="living">living</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span>.<span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="worship">worship</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="hamburger">hamburger</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="delicious">delicious</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="chinese">chinese</span> <span word="hamburger">hamburger</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Xian">Xian</span>.</p><p> <span word="But">But</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="A">A</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="chinese">chinese</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="restaurant">restaurant</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="popular">popular</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="little">little</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="junk">junk</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="hamburger">hamburger</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="chinese">chinese</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> 英语六级作文批改如下：</p><p> <span word="Why">Why</span> <span word="is">is</span>(删除) <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="myself">myself</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span>(改为<span word="several">several</span>) <span word="times">times</span>. <span word="Actually">Actually</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="Everytime">Everytime</span>(改为<span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="time">time</span>) <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="McDonalds">McDonalds</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="prevailing">prevailing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="china">china</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="living">living</span>(删除), <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="in">in</span>(改为<span word="among">among</span>) <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="worship">worship</span>(改为 <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="worship">worship</span> <span word="to">to</span>) <span word="things">things</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="hamburger">hamburger</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="delicious">delicious</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="chinese">chinese</span>(<span word="c">c</span>要大写) <span word="hamburger">hamburger</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Xian">Xian</span>.</p>
页:
[1]