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<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Way">Way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Success">Success</span></p><p> <span word="Success">Success</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="looks">looks</span> <span word="for">for</span>, <span word="longs">longs</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="dies">dies</span> <span word="for">for</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="is">is</span>? <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="like">like</span> <span word="pretty">pretty</span> <span word="house">house</span>, <span word="cool">cool</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="power">power</span>. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="indeed">indeed</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="define">define</span> <span word="success">success</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="success">success</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="feels">feels</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="doing">doing</span>。</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="success">success</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bear">bear</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="prerequisites">prerequisites</span>, <span word="namely">namely</span> <span word="knowing">knowing</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="lies">lies</span> <span word="in">in</span>, <span word="possessing">possessing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pursue">pursue</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="diligence">diligence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="dream">dream</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="success">success</span>. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="luckily">luckily</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="generation">generation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dreams">dreams</span>, <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="end">end</span>, <span word="make">make</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="successful">successful</span>。</p><p> <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="easy">easy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="succeed">succeed</span>, <span word="progressing">progressing</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="diligence">diligence</span> <span word="towards">towards</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="direction">direction</span>, <span word="youll">youll</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span>。</p><p> 【作文解析】</p><p> 这是一篇议论文。作者首先提出问题<span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="success">success</span>?,但并没有在这个问题上着更多的笔墨,而是直接引出了自己的观点:<span word="success">success</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="feels">feels</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="doing">doing</span>. 算是立意较为新颖的地方。随后在第二段对这种成功背后的三种必要条件做出了阐述。整体看,行文流畅,用语规范地道。</p><p> 本篇亮点:</p>
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