旅游
<p> <span word="Directions">Directions</span>： <span word="For">For</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="part">part</span>， <span word="you">you</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="Travel">Travel</span> <span word="Alone">Alone</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Travel">Travel</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Companion">Companion</span>? <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 120 <span word="words">words</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="base">base</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="composition">composition</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outline">outline</span> <span word="below">below</span>：</p><p> 1)有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行</p><p> 2)两种旅行方式的好处</p><p> 3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么?</p><p> <span word="Travel">Travel</span> <span word="Alone">Alone</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Travel">Travel</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Companion">Companion</span>?</p><p> 行文思路</p><p> 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明我的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。</p><p> 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明我更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。</p><p> 高分范文</p><p> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="Alone">Alone</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Travel">Travel</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Companion">Companion</span>?</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="way">way</span>， <span word="different">different</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="opinions">opinions</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>， <span word="while">while</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="companion">companion</span>. <span word="Of">Of</span> <span word="course">course</span>， <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="preference">preference</span>.</p><p> <span word="Traveling">Traveling</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>， <span word="one">one</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="freedom">freedom</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="traveler">traveler</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="arrange">arrange</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="tour">tour</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="wishes">wishes</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humoring">humoring</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>， <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traveler">traveler</span> <span word="unexpected">unexpected</span> <span word="surprise">surprise</span>， <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="enjoying">enjoying</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="scenery">scenery</span>. <span word="Compared">Compared</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>， <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="companion">companion</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="journey">journey</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="another">another</span>， <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="with">with</span>， <span word="youu">youu</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p>
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