冲刺六级写作高分常见错误4
<p> 2) <span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="spirits">spirits</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="indispensable">indispensable</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="viewing">viewing</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="camera">camera</span>.</p><p> <span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="spirits">spirits</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="indispensable">indispensable</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="viewed">viewed</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="camera">camera</span>.</p><p> 七、修饰语误置</p><p> 1) <span word="Spoken">Spoken</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> <span word="Spoken">Spoken</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="English">English</span>.</p><p> 2)<span word="To">To</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="clean">clean</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="factories">factories</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="poisonous">poisonous</span> <span word="gases">gases</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="clean">clean</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="factories">factories</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="poisonous">poisonous</span> <span word="gases">gases</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span>.</p><p> 八、垂悬修饰语</p><p> 1) <span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="reforms">reforms</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span>, <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="standard">standard</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="improved">improved</span>.</p><p> <span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="reforms">reforms</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="standard">standard</span>.</p><p> 2)<span word="To">To</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="news">news</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="posted">posted</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="once">once</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="news">news</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="posted">posted</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="once">once</span>.</p><p> 九、平行错误</p><p> 1) <span word="While">While</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="increased">increased</span>.</p><p> <span word="While">While</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span>.</p><p> 2) <span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="selected">selected</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="course">course</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="warned">warned</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="difficulty">difficulty</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="course">course</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="lasted">lasted</span>.</p>
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