冲刺六级写作高分常见错误6
<p> 5. 逻辑域错误。这个应该不难判断，但还是经常出错：</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>, <span word="both">both</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="wont">wont</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="money">money</span>... [可改为<span word="neither">neither</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="money">money</span>...]</p><p> 其他：</p><p> 语义重复</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span>... [<span word="agree">agree</span>一词本身就表示说话人的观点，可将<span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>去掉，或把后面的一半改为<span word="the">the</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span>... <span word="is">is</span> <span word="right">right</span>]</p><p> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="interests">interests</span> [<span word="common">common</span>与<span word="share">share</span>属同义反复，可改为<span word="have">have</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="interests">interests</span>或<span word="share">share</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="interests">interests</span>]</p><p> 论断过于绝对，缺乏足够思考</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="finance">finance</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="gets">gets</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sardine">sardine</span>-<span word="jam">jam</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="bus">bus</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="dine">dine</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="poor">poor</span>-<span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="restaurant">restaurant</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="roadsides">roadsides</span>... [相信富人也不至于笨到这个程度]</p><p> 句义严重反复，缺乏变化</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="disparity">disparity</span> <span word="affects">affects</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="disparity">disparity</span> <span word="doesnt">doesnt</span> <span word="affect">affect</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="part">part</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latter">latter</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="disparity">disparity</span> <span word="doesnt">doesnt</span> <span word="affect">affect</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span>. [不必多说了]</p><p> 连词错误</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="interests">interests</span>. [<span word="if">if</span>一词显然应该是<span word="that">that</span>，不过更通顺的说法应该是<span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="interests">interests</span>.]</p>
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