六级写作热点话题作文
<p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="Students">Students</span> <span word="Renting">Renting</span> <span word="House">House</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="Campus">Campus</span></p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="normal">normal</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="rent">rent</span> <span word="house">house</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="present">present</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="supported">supported</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>, <span word="either">either</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="follows">follows</span>:</p><p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="quiet">quiet</span> <span word="circumstance">circumstance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="devices">devices</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="comfortably">comfortably</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="list">list</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="leaving">leaving</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="Rarely">Rarely</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="studied">studied</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="university">university</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="rent">rent</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="house">house</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="golden">golden</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vivid">vivid</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="span">span</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="roommates">roommates</span> <span word="together">together</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="worried">worried</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="study">study</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="colleges">colleges</span> <span word="atmosphere">atmosphere</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="useful">useful</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="satisfactory">satisfactory</span> <span word="job">job</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="sum">sum</span> <span word="up">up</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disadvantage">disadvantage</span> <span word="overweight">overweight</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="one">one</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rent">rent</span> <span word="house">house</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>.</p><p> 涛涛对<span word="Jessie">Jessie</span>同学的作文的点评：</p><p> 这篇作文就是4级热点话题作文。整体文章逻辑条理不错。</p><p> 但是，美中不足的是文章中词汇表达中有不少错误，例如：动词的时态，谓语原形动词和非谓语动词，单词词性的混用，名词的单复数等没有很好地区分。</p>
页:
[1]