名师评析新六级作文范文
<p> 审题：原因现象类。可用模式，中心句＋1、2、3。因为是外语考试文章，观点不用细查，重要的语音表达。请一定记住，简单但严重错误是应该尽力避免的，宁可简单也别出现这种错误。本样文有些不妥之处，但完全符合四六级写作的基本要求，中心突出，层次分明，语言有变化，无重大语音错误。 <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="elderly">elderly</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="classics">classics</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="English">English</span> <span word="learners">learners</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="can">can</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="readings">readings</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="classical">classical</span> <span word="books">books</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="childhood">childhood</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="minds">minds</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="young">young</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="numbers">numbers</span> <span word="seldom">seldom</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="articles">articles</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="books">books</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="interests">interests</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="so">so</span>-<span word="called">called</span> <span word="classics">classics</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shadow">shadow</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="minds">minds</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="classics">classics</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="online">online</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="efficiently">efficiently</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="From">From</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="discussed">discussed</span> <span word="above">above</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="safely">safely</span> <span word="draw">draw</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="minds">minds</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="these">these</span> <span word="articles">articles</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="novels">novels</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="arranged">arranged</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span>. <span word="Certainly">Certainly</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="placed">placed</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="emphasis">emphasis</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>.</p>
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