六级写作高分常见错误（5）
<p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="meat">meat</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> 2) <span word="Crowded">Crowded</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="dwellers">dwellers</span>.</p><p> <span word="Heavy">Heavy</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="dwellers">dwellers</span>.</p><p> 十一、破句</p><p> 1) <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="pass">pass</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>.</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="pass">pass</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="interview">interview</span>.</p><p> 2) <span word="First">First</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="manners">manners</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="impression">impression</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="manners">manners</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="impression">impression</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span>.</p><p> 1. 最常见错误：从句连接词缺失，最主要的是<span word="THERE">THERE</span> <span word="BE">BE</span>句型：</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> ... [应为<span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> ...]</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span>... [应为<span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span>...或者直接说<span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span>...]</p><p> <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="affects">affects</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span>. [少了一个<span word="that">that</span>]</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="difficulty">difficulty</span>, <span word="someone">someone</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="friend">friend</span>. [少了一个<span word="who">who</span>]</p><p> 2. <span word="NO">NO</span> <span word="MATTER">MATTER</span> / <span word="WHETHER">WHETHER</span>错误，这是英语专业学生最容易犯的另一类错误：</p><p> <span word="Friendship">Friendship</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="people">people</span>. [宜改为<span word="Friendship">Friendship</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span>后面必须接一个小句(主语、谓语完整)]</p>
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