六级高分作文的写作模式及经典范文（三）
<p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="pushed">pushed</span> <span word="outwards">outwards</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="government">government</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pleasure">pleasure</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="concentrated">concentrated</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="centers">centers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="reluctant">reluctant</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outskirts">outskirts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="suburbs">suburbs</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="bear">bear</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="privilege">privilege</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="high">high</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="gas">gas</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="noise">noise</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="petrol">petrol</span> <span word="fumes">fumes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="toxic">toxic</span> <span word="gases">gases</span>, <span word="torn">torn</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="roar">roar</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="buses">buses</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="taxies">taxies</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thronged">thronged</span> <span word="ceaselessly">ceaselessly</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="crowds">crowds</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="living">living</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="countryside">countryside</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="clean">clean</span> <span word="atmosphere">atmosphere</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="closeness">closeness</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="nature">nature</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quiet">quiet</span>, <span word="peaceful">peaceful</span> <span word="surroundings">surroundings</span> --- <span word="the">the</span> <span word="essentials">essentials</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="suburbs">suburbs</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="discomfort">discomfort</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="necessity">necessity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="heavily">heavily</span> <span word="polluted">polluted</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="suburban">suburban</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="predominant">predominant</span> <span word="pattern">pattern</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>; <span word="and">and</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="perfection">perfection</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="services">services</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="prove">prove</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="superiority">superiority</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> 谋篇布局( 2 )</p><p> 根据话题加引段，于段尾提出自己的观点(也就是提示中的第三句要求内容)</p>
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