6月大学英语六级写作常见错误分析（十五）
<p> 段落的衔接</p><p> 1. 1) <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="Instead">Instead</span>, <span word="Third">Third</span>, <span word="In">In</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="Fourth">Fourth</span>, <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="But">But</span></p><p> 2) <span word="Although">Although</span>, <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="Once">Once</span>, <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="Sometimes">Sometimes</span>, <span word="At">At</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="times">times</span>, <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="Then">Then</span></p><p> 2. <span word="for">for</span>, <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="but">but</span>, <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="but">but</span>, <span word="and">and</span></p><p> 3. <span word="Television">Television</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="invented">invented</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="John">John</span> <span word="Logie">Logie</span> <span word="Baird">Baird</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="aeroplane">aeroplane</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="tried">tried</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fly">fly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="crashed">crashed</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="below">below</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="Baird">Baird</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="fortunate">fortunate</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="killed">killed</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="discourage">discourage</span> <span word="him">him</span>. <span word="Instead">Instead</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="older">older</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="tried">tried</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="diamonds">diamonds</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="coal">coal</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="enormous">enormous</span> <span word="explosion">explosion</span>. <span word="Yet">Yet</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="injured">injured</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="became">became</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="businessman">businessman</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="failed">failed</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="television">television</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="advised">advised</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="listen">listen</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="rented">rented</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="attic">attic</span>, <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="apparatus">apparatus</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="working">working</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="successful">successful</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="saw">saw</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="screen">screen</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="rushed">rushed</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="someone">someone</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="televise">televise</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="boy">boy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="room">room</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="image">image</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="boy">boy</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="screen">screen</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="boy">boy</span>, <span word="terrified">terrified</span>, <span word="had">had</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="head">head</span> <span word="down">down</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="again">again</span>, <span word="his">his</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="screen">screen</span>. <span word="Thats">Thats</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="discovered">discovered</span>.</p><p> 4. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="United">United</span> <span word="Stated">Stated</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="rewarded">rewarded</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="working">working</span>, <span word="producing">producing</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="achieving">achieving</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="equality">equality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="allows">allows</span> <span word="anyone">anyone</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="successful">successful</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="illustrated">illustrated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="stories">stories</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nineteenth">nineteenth</span>-<span word="century">century</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="novelist">novelist</span>, <span word="Horatio">Horatio</span> <span word="Alger">Alger</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="wrote">wrote</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="Dream">Dream</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="stories">stories</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="described">described</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="became">became</span> <span word="rich">rich</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="honesty">honesty</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="luck">luck</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="stories">stories</span> <span word="reinforced">reinforced</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="poor">poor</span>, <span word="were">were</span> <span word="capable">capable</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="wealthy">wealthy</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="honest">honest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>-<span word="working">working</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="Americans">Americans</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="Horatio">Horatio</span> <span word="Algers">Algers</span> <span word="rags">rags</span>-<span word="to">to</span>-<span word="riches">riches</span> <span word="stories">stories</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="represent">represent</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reality">reality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="immigrants">immigrants</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="United">United</span> <span word="States">States</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nineteenth">nineteenth</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="twentieth">twentieth</span> <span word="centuries">centuries</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="rich">rich</span>. <span word="Today">Today</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="rise">rise</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="upper">upper</span> <span word="classes">classes</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="Dream">Dream</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="described">described</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="myth">myth</span>.</p>
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