英语六级作文范文（高分版）
<p> <span word="Keep">Keep</span> <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="Hearts">Hearts</span> <span word="Strong">Strong</span></p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proverb">proverb</span> <span word="goes">goes</span>, <span word="constant">constant</span> <span word="drops">drops</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stone">stone</span>. <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="habits">habits</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="pave">pave</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cultivation">cultivation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="habits">habits</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="bewildered">bewildered</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="baffled">baffled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="temptations">temptations</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="alert">alert</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="resist">resist</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="temptations">temptations</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unswerving">unswerving</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>。</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="disciplined">disciplined</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="lifestyle">lifestyle</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="consist">consist</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="regular">regular</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="balanced">balanced</span> <span word="diet">diet</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="pursuing">pursuing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Yet">Yet</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="resist">resist</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="coziness">coziness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="staying">staying</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="temptation">temptation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tasty">tasty</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="fatty">fatty</span> <span word="food">food</span>, <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="giving">giving</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="cultivating">cultivating</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="habits">habits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="decreasingly">decreasingly</span> <span word="robust">robust</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="habits">habits</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="restrain">restrain</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="endless">endless</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span>. <span word="Otherwise">Otherwise</span>, <span word="distracted">distracted</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="indulged">indulged</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="habit">habit</span>, <span word="let">let</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="excellence">excellence</span>。</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="summary">summary</span>, <span word="good">good</span> <span word="habits">habits</span> <span word="rely">rely</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="hearts">hearts</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="disturbed">disturbed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="temptations">temptations</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="persistence">persistence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="perseverance">perseverance</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="heading">heading</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>。</p><p> 【点评】：</p><p> 本次作文要求以<span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="habits">habits</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="resisting">resisting</span> <span word="temptation">temptation</span>。即良好的习惯源自抵制诱惑，这一谚语为话题发表议论，在写作时需要对谚语的寓意进行阐释，并且表达自己的观点和看法，相比更为常见的话题型和观点型作文题来说，有一定的难度。首先要求能够对谚语进行准确的理解，抓住谚语表达的中心意思，明确的提出观点，然后围绕这个意思进行阐述。所以在写作时需要强调抵制诱惑对于保持或者培养良好习惯的重要性，以这一论点进行展开阐述，注意行文的逻辑性和语言的准确、流畅。</p>
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