四六级写作冲刺备考：常见错误分析3
<p> (六)连词方面的错误</p><p> 作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。</p><p> (误)<span word="One">One</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="English">English</span>，<span word="one">one</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="overcome">overcome</span> <span word="difficulties">difficulties</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="studies">studies</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="If">If</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="wants">wants</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="English">English</span>，<span word="he">he</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="overcome">overcome</span> <span word="difficulties">difficulties</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="studies">studies</span>.</p><p> 【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。</p><p> (七)搭配方面的错误</p><p> 学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。记得在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用<span word="heavier">heavier</span>，大多数人用的是<span word="The">The</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Shanghai">Shanghai</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="crowded">crowded</span>，而<span word="traffic">traffic</span>是不能与<span word="crowded">crowded</span>搭配的。</p><p> 1.(误)<span word="However">However</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="faster">faster</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bicycle">bicycle</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="However">However</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bicycle">bicycle</span>.</p><p> 【说明】<span word="speed">speed</span>只能和<span word="high">high</span>，<span word="low">low</span>，<span word="good">good</span>，<span word="top">top</span>，<span word="normal">normal</span>，<span word="fantastic">fantastic</span>，<span word="moderate">moderate</span>，<span word="surprising">surprising</span>等搭配，不能与<span word="fast">fast</span>，<span word="quick">quick</span>，<span word="slow">slow</span>搭配。但可以这样说<span word="A">A</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="faster">faster</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bicycle">bicycle</span>.</p><p> 2.(误)<span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="milk">milk</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="milk">milk</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="couldnt">couldnt</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="it">it</span>.</p>
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