四六级写作冲刺备考：常见错误分析4
<p> (十)句子冗余</p><p> 有些学生对某些词和词组缺乏真正的理解，经常在一个句子里重复使用意思相近的词或词组，形成赘言。</p><p> 1.(误)<span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reform">reform</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reform">reform</span>.</p><p> 2.(误)<span word="In">In</span> <span word="general">general</span>，<span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="remain">remain</span> <span word="single">single</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="Young">Young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="remain">remain</span> <span word="single">single</span>.</p><p> 【说明】<span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>和<span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span>的意思相同，<span word="in">in</span> <span word="general">general</span>和<span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span>的意思也很相近，完全可以删去一个。</p><p> (十一)中式英语</p><p> 中式英语(<span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="English">English</span>)在学生作文中相当普遍。许多学生习惯于按照中文的表达习惯来组织句子，表达思想，有时甚至丢掉了英语语法的概念。</p><p> 1.(误)<span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="oil">oil</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="coal">coal</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="after">after</span> 50 <span word="years">years</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="oil">oil</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="coal">coal</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="in">in</span> 50 <span word="years">years</span>.</p><p> 2.(误)<span word="After">After</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span>，<span word="they">they</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="university">university</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="Four">Four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="later">later</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="university">university</span>.</p><p> 【说明】在中文里表示方位、次序先后等习惯用后一个字，而在英语中，不同的情况下有不同的表达法。未来的50年后用介词<span word="in">in</span>，以前的4年后则用副词<span word="later">later</span>。</p>
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