四六级写作冲刺备考：常见错误分析2
<p> (三)一致方面的错误</p><p> 在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。</p><p> (误)<span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="enjoys">enjoys</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="resents">resents</span> <span word="advertisements">advertisements</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="bombarded">bombarded</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="hour">hour</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="day">day</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="resent">resent</span> <span word="advertisements">advertisements</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="bombarded">bombarded</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="hour">hour</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="day">day</span>.</p><p> 【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成<span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="enjoys">enjoys</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="resents">resents</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="bombarded">bombarded</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="hour">hour</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="day">day</span>.</p><p> (四)平行结构方面的错误</p><p> 这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。</p><p> 1.<span word="a">a</span>.(误)<span word="Narrow">Narrow</span> <span word="streets">streets</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="narrow">narrow</span> <span word="streets">streets</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>.(<span word="to">to</span> <span word="happen">happen</span>)</p><p> <span word="b">b</span>.(误)<span word="A">A</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="then">then</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="A">A</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="then">then</span>.</p><p> <span word="c">c</span>.(误)<span word="But">But</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="occur">occur</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="But">But</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="occur">occur</span>/<span word="arise">arise</span>.</p><p> <span word="d">d</span>.(误)<span word="Opportunities">Opportunities</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="belonged">belonged</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>.</p><p> (正)<span word="Opportunities">Opportunities</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="belong">belong</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>.</p><p> 【说明】<span word="happen">happen</span>，<span word="take">take</span> <span word="place">place</span>，<span word="occur">occur</span>，<span word="arise">arise</span>等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：<span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>.</p>
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