2014年6月大学英语四级作文的点评campus
<p> 【参考范文】</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Cherry">Cherry</span> <span word="Avenue">Avenue</span></p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="guide">guide</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cherry">Cherry</span> <span word="Avenue">Avenue</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="destination">destination</span>.</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="implies">implies</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cherry">Cherry</span> <span word="Avenue">Avenue</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="lined">lined</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="hundreds">hundreds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="neatly">neatly</span>-<span word="placed">placed</span> <span word="cherry">cherry</span> <span word="blossom">blossom</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="about">about</span> 200 <span word="meters">meters</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="scenic">scenic</span> <span word="spot">spot</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="spring">spring</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cherry">cherry</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="bloom">bloom</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="flowers">flowers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="dense">dense</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="distance">distance</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="surrounded">surrounded</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="pink">pink</span>-<span word="hued">hued</span> <span word="clouds">clouds</span>. <span word="Especially">Especially</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="breeze">breeze</span>, <span word="petals">petals</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cherry">cherry</span> <span word="blossoms">blossoms</span> <span word="flutter">flutter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="gently">gently</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="drizzle">drizzle</span>. <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="breath">breath</span>-<span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="scene">scene</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="visitors">visitors</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="trance">trance</span>.</p><p> <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="along">along</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="avenue">avenue</span>. <span word="Built">Built</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="early">early</span> 1900<span word="s">s</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="called">called</span> <span word="cherry">cherry</span> <span word="blossom">blossom</span> <span word="castle">castle</span>. <span word="Theyve">Theyve</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="there">there</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="word">word</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tour">tour</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cherry">Cherry</span> <span word="Avenue">Avenue</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="amazing">amazing</span> <span word="sight">sight</span>-<span word="seeing">seeing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span>.</p><p> 【点评】</p><p> 本次四级作文一反以往的图片题形式，改为情境式话题作文，可能让准备好图片题写作的同学有点措手不及。不过话题贴近生活，要求介绍大学校园的某个地方，即一篇介绍性的短文，难度不大，只要避免语法错误即可保证得分。想要博出彩拿高分，可以在词汇的丰富性上下功夫，避免同样的词多次出现。</p>
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