名师指导英语四级考试写作范文及点评
<p> 注：1. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="pointed">pointed</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> = <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> 2. 使不用<span word="make">make</span>，而用<span word="keep">keep</span>, <span word="allow">allow</span>, <span word="offer">offer</span></p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="insist">insist</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="curse">curse</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="blessing">blessing</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="information">information</span>, <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="literacy">literacy</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="weakened">weakened</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="worse">worse</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="vulgar">vulgar</span> <span word="commercials">commercials</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="indecent">indecent</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="cultivate">cultivate</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="tastes">tastes</span>, <span word="distort">distort</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="viewpoints">viewpoints</span> <span word="towards">towards</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="minds">minds</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="corrupted">corrupted</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="summary">summary</span>, <span word="television">television</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>. <span word="Whatever">Whatever</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="certain">certain</span>, <span word="television">television</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="neither">neither</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="nor">nor</span> <span word="bad">bad</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="uses">uses</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="determines">determines</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> 范文5. <span word="Travelling">Travelling</span></p><p> <span word="People">People</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="expand">expand</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="scope">scope</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="geographical">geographical</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> <span word="learning">learning</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="touring">touring</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="clothes">clothes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="otherwise">otherwise</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="have">have</span>.</p><p> 注：<span word="geographical">geographical</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> 押尾韵，如：押头韵 <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="clean">clean</span></p><p> <span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="dislike">dislike</span> <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="travelling">travelling</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="considerable">considerable</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="energy">energy</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="accommodation">accommodation</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="walking">walking</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="seeing">seeing</span> <span word="sights">sights</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="tires">tires</span> <span word="you">you</span>.</p>
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