英语四六级作文如何写出高分句式
<p> 一、句子开头多样化 英语是一种句型结构灵活多变的语言。由于拘泥于传统语法框架，许多初学写作的人都喜欢用名词开头写句子。这样写倒是无可非议，但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的同样结构的句子，就显得呆板生硬，缺乏生气了。事实上，在英语写作中除名词可放在句子的开头外，许多其它词类及词组均可放在句子开头的位置。 例句：<span word="Women">Women</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fuller">fuller</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="passes">passes</span>. 上面这句话至少还有两种开头方式： 1. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="passes">passes</span>, <span word="women">women</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fuller">fuller</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="society">society</span>. 2. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fuller">fuller</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="women">women</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="passes">passes</span>. 二、避免一个<span word="I">I</span>写到底 初学英文写作的人的另一通病是一个<span word="I">I</span>写到底，句首僵硬，缺乏变化。 试读下面这段文章： <span word="One">One</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="toward">toward</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="garden">garden</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="plot">plot</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="loved">loved</span> <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="peas">peas</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="proud">proud</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="table">table</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="pull">pull</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="grass">grass</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="garden">garden</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="blades">blades</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="up">up</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="patrol">patrol</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rows">rows</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="hands">hands</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="knees">knees</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="worms">worms</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bugs">bugs</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="kill">kill</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bury">bury</span> <span word="them">them</span>. 上面这一段共用了八个<span word="I">I</span>。当然上文若出自一个幼童笔下，倒不乏天真纯朴的趣味。不妨改写如下： <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="recollection">recollection</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="grateful">grateful</span> <span word="toward">toward</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="garden">garden</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="plot">plot</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="well">well</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peas">peas</span>. <span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="table">table</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="proud">proud</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="pull">pull</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="grass">grass</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="garden">garden</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="blades">blades</span> <span word="came">came</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="patrol">patrol</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rows">rows</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="hands">hands</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="knees">knees</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="worms">worms</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bugs">bugs</span>, <span word="killing">killing</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="burying">burying</span> <span word="them">them</span>. 改写后的段落仅有三个<span word="I">I</span>，一看就出自成人手笔。 三、 注意句子的紧凑性 1. 当两个句子是围绕着同一主题的不同方面进行说明时，可以将两句中相同的成分省略，形成并列句，从而使句子更加紧凑。这也就是省略结构所表达出的英文的紧凑性。需要注意的是两句中形成对应关系的<span word="something">something</span>要完全一致才可以省略，而且与相同成分相关的短语不可以省略。另外，如果表示比较结构的句子前后有相同成分，而且此成分有短语修饰，后面的相同成分要由代词来置换，而不能直接将其省略。 例句： <span word="They">They</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="acquire">acquire</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>. 他们不仅要从书本中学习知识，还要从社会中汲取知识。 <span word="Either">Either</span> <span word="Sally">Sally</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="be">be</span> .或者赛丽对此事负责，或者由我们来承担责任。 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="neighbor">neighbor</span>. 这个国家的人口是它邻国的三倍。 2. 条件句也是使句子紧凑的一种表达方式。这里我们介绍一下<span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span>在条件句中的用法，它相当于条件句的引导词<span word="if">if</span>，这时可译作如果...那么...或当...时。 例句：<span word="An">An</span> <span word="ensemble">ensemble</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="performs">performs</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="performs">performs</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="excused">excused</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rehearsal">rehearsal</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="concert">concert</span>. 当另外一个乐团演奏<span word="A">A</span>时，那麽演奏<span word="B">B</span>的乐团就有充分的理由不去彩排了。</p>
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