英语专业四级写作第一段构建模式
<p> 2011英语四六级进入备考阶段，编辑整理六级备考资料供大家参考，祝大家取得好成绩！ 专四写作的第一段相对来说是三段当中比较好写的一段，有很多方法可以实现第一段的迅速构建。在这里首先推荐一种比较好掌握的模式：背景改写+各家之言+。 ①背景改写：把写作指令当中提供的情景进行句式或者关键词的替换由此把原文背景变成自己的背景。 ②各家之言：专四写作常考的一类话题就是是非选择类，既然有选择必定会产生争议，所以一定会众说纷纭。这样我们在介绍完背景之后，就可以可以把别人对此事的态度晒出来。 ③我之所见：把别人的观点作为铺垫，最后说出自己的观点。 当然，为了让同学们能够更加迅速的掌握这种构建模式，在此给大家提供了相应的句架，便于大家更好的完成句子内容的表达。 背景改写常用句架以及实例： <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span>/<span word="universally">universally</span> <span word="acknowledged">acknowledged</span> <span word="thatIt">thatIt</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="universally">universally</span> <span word="acknowledged">acknowledged</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="source">source</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="urban">urban</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="of">of</span><span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="concernThe">concernThe</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fever">fever</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="western">western</span> <span word="festivals">festivals</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="concern">concern</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="uncommon">uncommon</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="uncommon">uncommon</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="superstars">superstars</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="enjoying">enjoying</span> <span word="striking">striking</span> <span word="popularity">popularity</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="for">for</span><span word="to">to</span> , <span word="and">and</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="aroused">aroused</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="heated">heated</span> <span word="debate">debate</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="hired">hired</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="babies">babies</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="weekends">weekends</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="holidays">holidays</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="aroused">aroused</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="heated">heated</span> <span word="debate">debate</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="undergraduates">undergraduates</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="baby">baby</span>-<span word="sitters">sitters</span>. <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="headache">headache</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Plagiarism">Plagiarism</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="headache">headache</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="field">field</span>. 各家之言常用句架以及实例： <span word="Views">Views</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="vary">vary</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="person">person</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span><span word="However">However</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="gentle">gentle</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="renders">renders</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="happier">happier</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="indulgence">indulgence</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="kids">kids</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="that">that</span> , <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="festivals">festivals</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="observed">observed</span>, <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="unique">unique</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="precious">precious</span> <span word="traditions">traditions</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="senses">senses</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="preserved">preserved</span>. 我之所见常用句架以及实例： <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="neglect">neglect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phones">phones</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="solutions">solutions</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="proposed">proposed</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span><span word="However">However</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="suggest">suggest</span> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="solutions">solutions</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="proposed">proposed</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="saving">saving</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="resources">resources</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="suggest">suggest</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="reuse">reuse</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="resources">resources</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="convinced">convinced</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="convinced">convinced</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="aid">aid</span>-<span word="education">education</span> <span word="projects">projects</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="development">development</span>. <span word="Personally">Personally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span>/<span word="merits">merits</span>/<span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="of">of</span><span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>/<span word="demerits">demerits</span>/<span word="harmsPersonally">harmsPersonally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="abroad">abroad</span> <span word="outshine">outshine</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effects">effects</span>. 为了让大家在高压的考场环境之下有更加出色的发挥，在此结合以往真题实例，让大加更加深入的了解一下第一段的展开方法。 2004年话题：<span word="Will">Will</span> <span word="Phones">Phones</span> <span word="Kill">Kill</span> <span word="Letter">Letter</span> <span word="Writing">Writing</span>? 范文： <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="phone">phone</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>. <span word="So">So</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="phones">phones</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="kill">kill</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>. <span word="Though">Though</span> <span word="phones">phones</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="phones">phones</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="kill">kill</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>. 注：交代背景之后，先让步承认方法意见的一些合理性，进而提出自己的相反意见。此之谓欲扬先抑法。 2001年话题：<span word="Travel">Travel</span> <span word="Broadens">Broadens</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Mind">Mind</span> 范文： <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="goes">goes</span>, <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="thousand">thousand</span> <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="thousand">thousand</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="top">top</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="Travel">Travel</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="broaden">broaden</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="enables">enables</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="appreciate">appreciate</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="scenery">scenery</span>, <span word="value">value</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="customs">customs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="history">history</span>. 注：用谚语引出背景，进而更加有力的表达自己的观点。此种方法比较好，但其局限性在于，有可能你的谚语储备并没有达到可以应对任何话题的程度。 2003年话题：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="Importance">Importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Keeping">Keeping</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="Mood">Mood</span>范文： <span word="Pressure">Pressure</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="career">career</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="families">families</span>. <span word="How">How</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="mood">mood</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="whatever">whatever</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>. 注：同样是先交代背景，然后提出问题，最后给出答案。此之谓设问法。这种方法不错。 </p>
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