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名师指导英语四级写作提分长短句原则

<p>  长短句原则</p><p>  工作还得一张一弛呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="creature">creature</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="eat">eat</span>; <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="man">man</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="read">read</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="action">action</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="satisfy">satisfy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="intellectual">intellectual</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="similar">similar</span>.</p><p> 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!</p><p>  强烈建议:在文章第一段用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。</p><p>  </p>
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