12月英语四六级写作中的简洁美
<p> 好的写作，首先而且至关重要的一点就是简洁。繁冗的写作堆砌了许多无用的词藻，反而减弱表述的清晰度。当然，也不能仅仅因为简短就认为短句一定优于长句。只要一个单词确实能起到一定的作用，它就应该留在句中。一般来说，只有在进行强调或修饰、美化句子时，才能使用重复的单词、语音和短语。修改文章，就是要删繁就简。比较下面这对句子，注意体会二者的差别及效果。</p><p> 1) <span word="Dr">Dr</span>. <span word="Sun">Sun</span> <span word="Yat">Yat</span>-<span word="sen">sen</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="boat">boat</span>.</p><p> 2) <span word="Dr">Dr</span>. <span word="Sun">Sun</span> <span word="Yat">Yat</span>-<span word="sen">sen</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="boat">boat</span>.</p><p> 斜体字部分较啰嗦，因为<span word="by">by</span>就是<span word="by">by</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="boat">boat</span>。</p><p> 请看下列例句</p><p> <span word="Wordy">Wordy</span>: <span word="It">It</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="painful">painful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> 12 <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="seven">seven</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="It">It</span> <span word="pains">pains</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> 12 <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="seven">seven</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="week">week</span>.</p><p> <span word="Wordy">Wordy</span>: <span word="It">It</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="people">people</span>.</p><p> <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>.</p><p> <span word="Wordy">Wordy</span>: <span word="This">This</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basic">basic</span> <span word="elements">elements</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>.</p><p> <span word="Better">Better</span>: <span word="This">This</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="master">master</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basics">basics</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="writing">writing</span>.</p><p> <span word="Wordy">Wordy</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="search">search</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="forest">forest</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="complete">complete</span>.</p>
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